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Statement of Purpose Review

A focused audit of your statement of purpose or personal essay — structure, evidence, and voice — without reviewing the entire packet.

From ฿4,900 per statement

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Who this is for

Applicants who already have a draft statement and need a rigorous read on argument, specificity, and alignment with the programme’s language.

What you receive

  • Two rounds of annotated feedback on a single statement up to 1,200 words
  • Structural outline suggesting reorderings where the argument drifts
  • Short note on tone and overused phrasing to cut

Outside this scope

  • Review of CV, recommendation letters, or additional essays
  • Writing the statement on your behalf

How the audit unfolds

  1. 1

    Prompt alignment check

    We read the official prompt and mark where your draft answers, sidesteps, or overshoots the ask.

  2. 2

    Evidence pass

    Vague claims are flagged and replaced with requests for specific examples, dates, and outcomes from your record.

  3. 3

    Second look

    After your revision, we return a final annotated pass focused on clarity and word economy.

The intended result

A tighter statement that answers the prompt with concrete evidence rather than generic aspiration.

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